This is TRY 4 for the Creative Progress Challenge... The backgrounds and post-it's and ric rac is from Deena Hagans's Kaitlyn's Party Kit. So are the newly added arrows (which have been recolored). The ricrac has been recolored to orange. The fonts are "childish Alpha" and "BrushscrD" Thanks to wifeofarmynco & pcrihfield suggestion to use red sticky's with white text... And I changed title to white. I also switched around the layout - I think it looks a little more balanced...
Registered: December 2005 Location: Baumholder, Germany Posts: 5,589
Mon September 18, 2006 1:57pm
I like the way you changed the items around a bit .. much more balanced. the only thing I would change now .. is to move the bottom ribbon in front of the title .. does that make sense? right now it looks like your title is just floating above the whole page, I think if you moved the ribbon in front of the title it would help to hold it down, it would cover up the bottom of the J a little bit, but that's ok....if you move the title down a little bit you could send the ribbon through the J, over the upward part of the line and and then under the straight line. just a thought .. no need to change it if you don't want.
I think I'm going to leave it - that was the effect I was aiming for - to have it floating higher above the page...
Harleybabe Power Poster
Registered: January 2006 Location: MEEEchigan Posts: 1,314
Mon September 18, 2006 2:27pm
OH NICELY DONE.
the critiguqe that you were given we so good (on the last one). I love this! The red notes really balance it. On the other one the green framers seemed a bit over powering with the soft notes. Now this looks good!
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~~~ Stephanie~~~
mom to Bella
furr babies Kramer ,
Igor and Krystal
pcrihfield Power Poster
Registered: March 2006 Location: Ohio Posts: 2,488
Mon September 18, 2006 2:37pm
I love the way you moved the notepads and the little pictures around! Also, like the addition of the little arrows and the title changed to white. Real improvements! I really glad you happier with it now. Great job on it!
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Mon September 18, 2006 3:06pm
THIS WAS SOOOOO COOL - THANKS FOR ALL YOUR HELP! I love how I went from what I originally thought was an awesome page, to this which I think (for myself and style) is far superior! I also loved using this kit - It's soooo versatile!
bugnsamsmom I Live Here
Registered: August 2006 Location: Burlington, Wisconsin Posts: 3,992
Mon September 18, 2006 6:38pm
you did a terrific job on the changes...so glad that you like how it came out!
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makeyesup I Live Here
Registered: September 2006 Location: Illinois Posts: 3,942
Mon September 18, 2006 8:15pm
Missed the first couple since I was not on line. However, think the last changes make the picture superb. Moving the sticky notes between the pictures and adding the arrows tied it all together nicely