Registered: January 2006 Location: MEEEchigan Posts: 1,314
Mon September 18, 2006 9:58pm
Oh my goodness how cute is this. The only thing I can come up with is maybe makign the journaling just a tad smaller so its off the green just a bit.
LOVE how you used many pictures but its not cluttered feeling!
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~~~ Stephanie~~~
mom to Bella
furr babies Kramer ,
Igor and Krystal
bugnsamsmom I Live Here
Registered: August 2006 Location: Burlington, Wisconsin Posts: 3,992
Mon September 18, 2006 10:13pm
ok...this is much better...I like the lo of the photos much much better and the journaling really adds to it. Great job!
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wifeofarmynco I Live Here
Registered: December 2005 Location: Baumholder, Germany Posts: 5,589
Mon September 18, 2006 11:45pm
the addition of the journaling and the rearrangement is great .. love how you extracted the shoes .. cute. my only suggestion now would be to change the font of the journaling (that's just a personal choice though .. I can't stand that font .. LOL) what you have it not a bad font, just personally not one of my favorites. There are other handwriting fonts that look much better to me (Claudia is one of my new favorites). Anwyay .. other than a change of font and possibly font size the layout is good.
the only "other" thing, after looking at it again .. is I might make the journaling go across the full page and put the shoes in a line across the bottom of the page .. to kind of mimick the photos. Just a thought.